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Love, can make you feel on top of the world,
It makes you feel more than alive.
Can but blossom inside, like a red rose uncurled,
Headfirst into the void of life you dive.

They say absence makes the heart grow fonder,
Upon this phrase, for hours I sit and ponder.
Try in everyway I can, to make you see,
With every feeling, thought and breath I scream I LOVE THEE!

Love, can kill you from the inside,
A masked murderer is he running free.
No one can realise until you have died,
Cutting out the insides, torturing me.

Listening to her in my arms, like a kitten hear her purr,
Within the psychological prison I hide.
Never once could I bear myself to lie to her,
For her, each and every night I have cried.

Whether it be physical or mental, the tears flow,
The distance amplified by love creates the pain.
Like a river, it all begins to show,
From this, the masked murderer that is love, the only to gain
©2005-2009 ~eyeball-love
:iconeyeball-love:

Author's Comments

This was the first poem i wrote about being inlove with a girl.. that girl happens to be my ex gf now :( o well lol
I was studying jekyll and hyde at the time so the name just came to me one day when I was writing the stupid Essay about the theme of duality in the stupid novel..

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wow...just wow, the poem seems to have stolen the vocabulary i should have! well, now i want to draw something *goes off to doodle some more*

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::i faced the wall and the world
and did it my way::
:iconeyeball-love:
thankies lol.. i wrote it.. gawd must be coming up a year ago now.. when you're inlove you do strange things.. like write poems lol.. show me what u drew when you finish
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i finished it a while ago...the poem put a pose in my head (the pose around the purring line) that reminded me of two characters i made up, who are so not at that point yet but will be! it's the one in my gallery called 'what if'...well, i'm pretty sure that's the one^^;

--
::i faced the wall and the world
and did it my way::

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